Thread:BobaFettFan10/@comment-5429417-20170529120243

This is a bit of a review from me. This is not a warning or anything and I'm not going to block you after this so don't worry. I just want to bring something to attention that you need to know. I hate to bring this up but when I blocked you last time, I only blocked you for spamming categories to pages. I didn't do it because you have rather poor grammar. However, back then, I did told you that you need to work on your grammar more.

On most pages you have edited on, you tend to make grammar issues that can be easily fixed. I'm not saying you make grammar mistakes all of the time but at least half of your edits do consist of poor grammar. This includes not using commas, not using periods, not using the right form of words when it's necessary "such as 'a area'", and, most commonly, not captalizing words when they are needed. Also, sometimes the sentences you right didn't make sense because of poor grammar.

Another thing you commonly do is misspell words. You do this a lot and you even misspell words when the correct name is right in front of you. Like on the Big Spiny page, you spelled it as "Big Spiney" despite the name "Big Spiny" is right there on the page and in the link. I'm still not sure if you made the edit like that on purpose or not but that is something hard to misspell when the correct name is literally right in front of you. I'm not trying to be rude but I'm just saying you need to use a reference when it's right there.

Finally, you really don't need to point out the obivious on pages or fail to state what to do in a certain case. Like on a page from ''Paper Mario: Color Splash," you said that you need an important item to process through the game. However, you never stated what the item was. You have to if you want to be more constructive. For pointing out the obivious, you tend to state something that is pretty much stated already or is plainly clear.

As I said, this is not a warning and having bad grammar isn't against the rules. However, whenever you make edits, I always have to check over them to make sure you didn't make any mistakes. I trust other frequent users not to check over their edits because I know they don't make those mistakes. However, I have to for you seen you've been doing this for weeks now. My advice, make sure you hit the preview button and double check your edits. If you have spell check, please use it. Some browsers have this feature and you can check over your edits in source mode. Just use this message as a way to help you out on grammar. It's okay to edit the page again if you see a mistake you made. Just don't make the same amount of edits 5 or more times in the same day as you have done on the Mario & Luigi: Paper Jam page. Hope this helps you out a bit. 